求英语高手修改英语语法

Question

The character of literary in destiny was influenced by more aspects, for example the authors' intention and the reader needed.
[低频警示] literary in destiny 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[搭配统计] 动名搭配 influence...character 在教材中出现过 12 次
[学习提示] 易混词汇: appearance, look, face, aspect 均含事物或人的“外表，容貌”之意。
[批改提示] influence近义表达有act upon/ affect/ bear upon
[批改提示] character表示“特征，性格”。注意与characteristic的区别。详情点击

Nancy had complex character which caused her death destiny have three reasons in this novel.
[低频警示] cause...destiny 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[低频警示] three reasons in this 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[低频警示] her death destiny 在语料库中无此用法，疑似中式英语
[学习提示] 易混词汇: alphabet, letter, character, script 均有“字母”之意。
[批改提示] cause近义表达有lead to/ result in/ bring about/ give rise to/ engender

Answer 1

第一句话不太明白你要说什么。。。 是要说：”文学小说中，主角的命运是由多种方面决定的，比如作者的意向和读者的需求。“ 吗？

第二句话：
Nancy had complex character which caused her death destiny have three reasons in this novel.

应该是：

In this novel, the background setting of Nancy's complex character which caused her death have three reasons. 在这部小说中，把南希设定为性格负责的角色，有3个理由。 而正是这种设定导致了南希的死亡。