写作思路：要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中，我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述，尽可能简化人物语言。这样，即使情节连贯，又使语句“简练”。
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"Come and see what I have brought back today?" Dad had not entered the door, the loud voice in the door, his voice can not hide the excitement. I ran to the door and took a small box from him. "What is this, dad?" I couldn't help asking curiously. "Don't you just open it and see it?" Dad smiles mysteriously.
“快过来看我今天又带回什么好东西了？”爸爸还没有进门，大嗓门便在门口响了起来，他的声音里难掩兴奋之情。我赶紧跑到门口，从他手里接过一个小箱子。“爸爸，这是什么呀？”我忍不住好奇地问。“你打开看看不就知道了？”爸爸神秘地一笑。
I opened the box expectantly as if I had found a new one. I know it must be another new thing, because Dad always brings some new babies home to share with us. I took out a small magic box which was not much bigger than football from the box.
我像发现新大一陆似的，期待地打开箱子。我知道这一定又是一个新玩意儿，因为爸爸总是隔三差五会把一些新宝贝带回家跟我们分享。
From the package, I knew that the box was called "Dora", which means that like Pandora's box in Greek mythology, many babies would fly out. When my father opens it, what can I do to fly it Dad laughed and said, "you will know after installation."
我从箱子里拿出一个比足球大不了多少的小魔盒，从包装上知道这个魔盒叫“朵拉”，意为像希腊神话里的潘朵拉魔盒，会飞出很多宝贝。我激动地问爸爸：“我打开它后，会有什么宝贝飞出来啊？”爸爸听了哈哈大笑，说：“你安装后就知道了。”
I assembled it carefully. It turns out that Dora is a new technology product that my father has helped to apply for. It can carry out multi-party voice interaction and plant flowers automatically. "She" is just a little round head intelligent robot! I'm so lucky!
我认真组装起来，原来“朵拉”是一个爸爸新帮助申请的科技产品，可以进行多方的语音互动，还会自动种花。“她”简直就是一个小小的圆头智能机器人啊！我如获至宝！
This time it's my turn to be serious. "Dad, I'm going to learn the basic knowledge well and inherit the persistence, faith and spirit of our predecessors. I hope to become a real maker one day and make our life better and better." I answered firmly.
这回轮到我认真了，“爸爸，我现在好好把基础知识学好，传承创客前辈们的执着、信念和一精一神，希望将来有一天也成为一名真正的创客，让自己的人生更一精一彩，让我们的生活过得更好！”我坚定地回答着。
写好作文的技巧
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