写作思路：要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中，我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述，尽可能简化人物语言。这样，即使情节连贯，又使语句“简练”。
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"Come and see what I have brought back today?" Dad had not entered the door, the loud voice in the door, his voice can not hide the excitement. I ran to the door and took a small box from him. "What is this, dad?" I couldn't help asking curiously. "Don't you just open it and see it?" Dad smiles mysteriously.
“快过来看我今天又带回什么好东西了？”爸爸还 没有进门，大嗓门便在门口响了起来，他的声音里难掩兴奋之情。我赶紧跑到门口，从他手里接过一个小箱子。“爸爸，这是什么呀？”我忍不住好奇地问。“你打开看看不就知道了？”爸爸神秘地一笑。
I opened the box expectantly as if I had found a new one. I know it must be another new thing, because Dad always brings some new babies home to share with us. I took out a small magic box which was not much bigger than football from the box. From the package, I knew that the box was called "Dora", which means that like Pandora's box in Greek mythology, many babies would fly out. When my father opens it, what can I do to fly it Dad laughed and said, "you will know after installation."
我像发现新大一陆似的，期待地打开箱子。我知道这一定又是一个新玩意儿，因为爸爸总是隔三差五会把一些新宝贝带回家跟我们分享。我从箱子里拿出一个比足球大不了多少的小魔盒，从包装上知道这个魔盒叫“朵拉”，意为像希腊神话里的潘朵拉魔盒，会飞出很多宝贝。我激动地问爸爸：“我打开它后，会有什么宝贝飞出来啊？”爸爸听了哈哈大笑，说：“你安装后就知道了。”
I assembled it carefully. It turns out that Dora is a new technology product that my father has helped to apply for. It can carry out multi-party voice interaction and plant flowers automatically. "She" is just a little round head intelligent robot! I'm so lucky!
我认真组装起来，原来“朵拉”是一个爸爸新帮助申请的科技产品，可以进行多方的语音互动，还 会自动种花。“她”简直就是一个小小的圆头智能机器人啊！我如获至宝！
This time it's my turn to be serious. "Dad, I'm going to learn the basic knowledge well and inherit the persistence, faith and spirit of our predecessors. I hope to become a real maker one day and make our life better and better." I answered firmly.
这回轮到我认真了，“爸爸，我现在好好把基础知识学好，传承创客前辈们的执着、信念和一精一神，希望将来有一天也成为一名真正的创客，让自己的人生更一精一彩，让我们的生活过得更好！”我坚定地回答着……