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尊敬的xxx,
我诚心要请你来参加我的生日晚会,时间定于2011年3月11日晚上7点在学校里举行。
希望你能准时参加。
谢谢。
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第1个回答  2011-03-11
尊敬的xxx,
Respect of XXX.

我诚心要请你来参加我的生日晚会,时间定于2011年3月11日晚上7点在学校里举行。
I sincerely invite you to come to my birthday party, time is scheduled for 2011 March 11 7pm held in school.

希望你能准时参加。
Hope you can attend on time.

谢谢。
Thank you.
第2个回答  2011-03-10
Dear xxx,

Sincerely inviting you to take part in my birthday party, which will be held in our school at 7:00 pm on 11th,March 2011.Hope you join on time.

thank you !本回答被提问者采纳
第3个回答  2011-03-11
Distinguished ***,
May I sincerely invite you to my birthday party fixed at 19:00 on March 11st, 2011 in the school.
I look forward to your punctual attendance.
Many thanks.
这比较符合邀请书的形式说法
第4个回答  2011-03-12
Dear xxx,

I am sincerely inviting you to my birthday party scheduled at 19:00 on March 11, 2011 held in the school.

Hope you will attend on time.

Thank you.

提问不采纳,做事不厚道。
第5个回答  2011-03-10
Dear xxx,
I sincerely invite you to my party. It will be held on school Mar. 11th, 2011.I hope you can come on time.