第1个回答 2012-08-20
Sincerely Mr./Ms. Visa Officer,
Hereby is to verify that my father is to be retired because of poor performance of his former employer(或unit). Meanwhile, he was interested in stock investment long ago (he had studied for it, too), thus daily expenses of my family are primarily depended on his share profits. Moreover, my parents' earnings are spent on savings. Therefore, I do enclose herewith my father's stock account list and those bank bills to declare the financial condition of my family. Thanks very much for your check/checking(2选1).
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第2个回答 2012-08-20
Dear Sir/Madamn:
My father is retiring becauce of the company's poor efficiency ,anyway,he was in great intresest in investing stock market-he had ever learned relevant knowledge,and he is still holding some shares ,the benefit from which is soupporting our daily livings and the wages of my parent is deposited in the bank.
I hereby enclose a transaction list of my father's share account and a bank letter to explain the finacial state of our family.
Thanks.
虽然给楼主翻译了,但我个人认为楼主的信说服力不够.(以我给别人翻译过类似信件的经验,)比如您提到的您母亲的收入,那应该说明您母亲的工作状况,您父母是否合用一个帐号,是否分享财富?您父亲的股票收入是否仅够用与家庭开支,还有您申请是留学还是旅游?还是您申请父母探亲?您父母的存款是否全部支持您的费用?这些都要在信你明确说明.
第3个回答 2012-08-20
Dear visa officer Sir / Madam: my father work units due to poor efficiency, are to be retired, he had to invest in stocks are very interested in ( he had learned this knowledge ), our family expenses is basically his stock return, my parents pay for savings, so I especially with father stock list of accounts and bank water alone, as a description of our finances. Hereby explained!
像这种比较重要的书面资料，你还要好好看一下，我不确定行不行
追问亲，我自己也翻了一遍，因为是给领事馆的，希望不要用GOOGLE,谢谢！
追答那你就在提问上说明就完了，好心帮你……
追问我知道好心帮我，谢谢！我就是希望可以再润色下
第4个回答 2012-08-20
Dear sir,
My father's work company has poor efficiency, therefore my father is retired. My father has a lot of interest in the stock market(he also had study about it) , our daily expenses basically came from the stock income, and my parents salary are in the savings. I have attached my father's stock list and bank statement, hopefully it can explain to you about our capital position.
Thank you