Dear Dan,
I am a girl,I am from China.My name is Ethel.Write the letter to you is my pleasure.I like "Harry Potter" very much.I admire Harry's brave and his steady.He losted his parents many years ago and he is a firm boy.You showed it well.You are great actor. The series of "Harry Potter" are my best friends.I watch it every day.
I heartfelt to hope the seventh of “Harry Potter”.But I was disappoint.Rowling gave it much sad,I feel sorry to Fred,Remus,Severus and Tonks.Voldmort was died,but they are paid their all.
“The Blood Half of Prince” put on stage in July in China.I approrach to have the moving. I except your letters and sign picture.I’m feel ashamed of my English. It is not good.I think of I will be serious about my English lessons.I hope it is not to disturbs you.
Forever Love
Yours Ethel
P.S:My address in China
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Zip Code：XXXXX
……请不要用GOOGLE的翻译工具给我，谢谢。
最后一段更改如下：
I heartfelt to hope the seventh of “Harry Potter”. But I feel very sad about it.Rowling gave it sad,I feel sorry to Fred,Remus,Severus and Tonks.Voldmort was died,but they are paid their all.
About “HP and The Blood Half of Prince”，it released in China in July. Am looking forward to the film and you.I want to the film.I want to have your letters and signed photos.I’m feel ashamed of my English. Tell the truth it is not good.I think of I will be serious about my English lessons. I hope it is not to disturbs you.